A Six-Sentence Story
The announcement came as I was on vacation at the lake house. My writer’s group was having a six-sentence story contest. I love a good writing challenge and this one was fun and interesting. Each sentence had to carry weight. The story needed to grab the reader’s attention, carry through with a story arc and end in a conclusion. All in six sentences. What to write about? Where to get ideas?
Leonardo da Vinci had a term for his visualization process: Saper Vedere -Knowing how to see.
Rick Rubin, in his book The Creative Act says “The ability to look deeply is the root of creativity. To see past the ordinary and mundane and get to what might otherwise be invisible.”
Seeing, really seeing the moonlight shine across the bay one night was the inspiration I needed. Here’s my story, in six sentences.
Legacy
The moon woke me in the middle of the night as it shone through the bedroom window of the lakeside house I’d inherited. It’s all that’s left of my parents. I stepped outside and saw its half-face, bright enough to spin silver ripples across the dark water and cast lacy wicker shadows on the deck. I remembered my mother told me that once, after we’d scattered some of Dad’s ashes into the bay, she’d gotten her pillow and blanket and had slept on the porch on a night like this. Because her fading memory often blurred the lines between fantasy and reality, I didn’t believe her then. Now, I do.
Where are inspirations and ideas? All around us if we open our eyes and really see.
Threads of Thought
Your turn. “Know how to see.” Find a small moment, thought or idea and try your hand at a six sentence story, or a poem, or a painting, or a sketch, or… Live life creatively!
Fun summer reads are only a click away. Out of the Crayon Box: thoughts on Teaching, Retirement, and Life, and Until Italy: A Traveler’s Memoir are here!
Lovely!
Thank you so much. This one holds a lot of meaning for me.
Bravo Deb. Great legacy. We are all the stitches in the fabric of life. The thread continues.
Yes, and thanks for the sewing reference. Well said my friend!
Debra, I loved reading, and re-reading your legacy. Also like the photos of your articles and books on your website. Diane
I’m glad you enjoyed the story and took the time to look at the other parts of my website. Thank you for your kind words.
Debra, I loved reading and re-reading your Legacy. Also like the copies of your published articles. You really have great style in your website. Diane Blair
Thanks for your comments on my story and website. So glad to have you as a writing friend!
Your story is beautifully poetic. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much. It was a work from the heart
Leaves such a vivid picture in my mind!
Sometimes I think of writing as painting with words. With only six sentences each word carries weight.